Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, October 26, 2018

Wednesday, September 5, 2018

My 2018 speech



My writing goal was to use more punctuation and as you can see above I have use -, ? and !

Monday, December 4, 2017

fairys spring

last Thursday the seniors had the ultimate time in wait wait stop it wasn't that ultimate but still it was pretty cool. we where at the wonderful Rainbow springs  there was lots to do but there was really only one thing people wanted to do and that was the dant dant dan the big enormous big splash.
it was lame at first but the big drop made my brain fall out well not really but it felt like it. there was also the bird show, lizards,native birds,and some trout.

Monday, September 25, 2017

re writing katy perrys firework song

Do you ever feel like a (np)blowning leaf
Drifiting through the wind, wanting to start again?
Do you ever feel, feel so hair  thin
Like a house of cards, one blow from caving in?

Do you ever feel like a worm(np)?
Screams but no one seems to hear a thing
Do you know that there's still a chance for you
'Cause there's a spark in you?

You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine
Just own the night like the moon of the sky(s)

'Cause, baby, you're (m)a star of the sky
Come on, show 'em what you're worth
Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby, you're star(m)
Come on, let your colours burst
Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"
You're gonna leave 'em all in awe, awe, awe

You don't have to feel like l broken bone(np)
You're original, cannot be burend
If you only knew what the future holds
After a hurricane comes a rainbow

Maybe a reason why all the doors are closed
So you could open one that leads you to the perfect road
Like a zooming lambo (s), your greatness (np) will grow
And when it's time you'll know
You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine
Just own the night like a lightning bolt st (s)
'Cause, baby, you're star(m)
Come on, show 'em what you're worth
Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"
As you shoot across the sky-y-y
Baby, you're star (m)
Come on, let your colours burst

Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"

Friday, August 25, 2017

scratch writing

intro
Hey, you no not you the one with the green shirt yes you have you heard of scratch? noo!!!  this coding platform is so fun I couldn't think of anybody that does not play.

Fun and learning
This coding platform is easy to learn and do plus you can do anything you want this coding platform is packed with learning and fun. You will have different colored blocks with their different moves to make the game or animation. If you put them all together your sprite character could do flips spins change the backdrop color and the size.


Help on scratch
Scratch has lots of tips and constructions how to make different things that's the great thing you don't start making empty handed.IAs i said in the last paragraph you can learn scratch has tutorials that is   like your code teachers also
Scratch has backpacks where you can get codes from other players worldwide.

conclusion
I love scratch and can ashore you will to. This code platform will get to the finish in no time to becoming a code master!
this is great for most ages you should sign up now come on do it!! to let your imagination run wild with learning fun and code.

Tuesday, May 23, 2017

into the woods the musical

                                  the into the woods play


wait you have int seen into the woods musical your wasting your life!!!!!! packed fun laughter cheering and moments you wont forget. this is a musical you cant miss. the show that will bring you the time of your life.
this is the play of the movie. there are so many reasons that you should go it would take me way to long to tell you everything.

. First you will  never regret going and it will be a great memory you will love.


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Tuesday, March 28, 2017

camp 2017

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William and max are having a blast in the tubing activityScreenshot 2017-03-27 at 14.25.34.png
Me and my friends are having a wet rideScreenshot 2017-03-27 at 14.29.46.png
We are carefully weaving a small fishScreenshot 2017-03-27 at 14.40.02.png
They are getting ready to killScreenshot 2017-03-27 at 14.49.37.png
Noah is dive through the net with speed


Friday, March 17, 2017

hoani and the merman (tamati)

Hoani and the Merman (TAMATI

Many,MANY,MANY! years ago there was a Merman named Tamati who sat on the bottom of lake Rotorua.
He only comes up to the surface every 10 million years for food and his food of choice was humans.

He is 30ft tall and 12ft wide and very muscular. In Rotorua the village is in the east bottom  right it is called Whakarewarewa the living maori village. It is about 4.7 km away from lake Rotorua. Whakarewarewa is a happy thermal village because they have all the resources they need like haugi and freshwater to survive.

Many years ago a chief called hoani he was very muscular for his height he was very stubby he was only 5 ft 9 they were very happy but they were not prepared for what was happening. Until someone came to their village uninspected saying that Tamati will come at midnight they did not believe the stranger. but it was true when everybody was sleeping at 12 tamati came making waves go everywhere as he started walking to the village it shock the whole earth waking up everybody in the village they thought is was a party but i wasn’t Hoani immediately called a meeting in the underground base Tamati with his big steps he was already halfway in a couple of minutes Hoani said this is my village i have to defend it Tamati was one step away.


Hoani was looking at the merman smashing and eating everything in its way he was about to go back into the wavy water Hoani chased Tamati all the way back to the lake and then hoani threw a spear right at the merman’s  head splash the merman fell head first in the lake sinking to the bottom like a sinking ship his rusty and fagile bones still remain near mokoia island. Now there was some music and the National Anthem the village thought it was a party and this time it was with all haungi everyone was happy, Hoani was given a beautiful coat made of flax for bravery, Hoani sadly died during the year because he defended and died for his village there was a big funeral, WITH CHRIST AS OUR CENTRE WE STRIVE FOR EXCELLENCE because the village knows all about him and they follow in his footsteps to bravery, and try to be like him but they had to plan a huge construction on their village


NO ONE KNOWS IF THAT IS THE END     (MYTH)

goals legend writing






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Writing  Narrative Legends

I need help to write  a narrative legend.


I can write a narrative legend if I am guided.
I can use some structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)

I can use some descriptive words to describe characters, setting and events.



I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)

I use a range of descriptive words to describe characters, settings and events.

I use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences.  

I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.

I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)

I use a range of descriptive words and details to describe characters, settings and events.  Using figurative language to help develop connection with the audience.

I deliberately use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences to set the mood of my writing.  

I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.

I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.

I seek feedback on how to improve my writing.





Me and don on this one